All Comments on 'SAMBA Pt. 08'

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namidaboshinamidaboshi7 months ago

Why are you bringing in coprophagia and coprophilia into this story. It's kind a ruining the experience here.

mantonrichardsmantonrichards7 months agoAuthor

@namidaboshi Those elements have been in the story since part 3. Perhaps you skimmed past it and missed it. It is not to everyone's taste, hence it is never explored any deeper, nor more frequently, than what is here.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Not my cup of tea.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

The story continues to get hotter. Mandy is the perfect mom in this series!!! Also a welcome return to more anal. Hoping Ryan gets to have Mandy's ass too. The kid deserves it!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Sorry, this story became repeatable and boring. The same anal with Mandy. But is not everything. It is a story about moms and sons. Therefore Ryan is "outlier". I would like if author paid attention not on Mandy, Clair, and Jesse but other SAMBA "graduates". I prefer write what I DON'T like not about I like

mantonrichardsmantonrichards7 months agoAuthor

And who might Jesse be? Not one of my characters, to be sure :)

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

You need to have Mark and Mandy got out on dates, her in tan nylons and heels and Nark pound her Pussy fully dressed.. with her nylons at her hips

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Dude, you’re killing this otherwise great story with all the anal sex.. goodness put good old traditional vaginal, missionary poundings into this. I know he’s 19 but make him go 3-4 times in one night.. enough ass poundings goodness

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I love this story. Really great.

Mom-son stuff is my favorite, but I also occasionally like Dad-daughter stories. I think it would be really interesting to see a gender-swapped spin-off of this series where Dr. Dearlove (or one of her colleagues) help fathers "bond" with their teen daughters, and in this case the moms are left in the dark.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Just a blackmail story of a young mom and her son or sons. The moms trying to move on with her life, FINALLY meets a man she wants to settle with but has a big issue this man cannot know about.. she’s also in a very sexual relationship with her boys at the same time. But the boys won’t let her marry easily unless…..

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I think eventually Mandy’s husbands need to SEE for himself what’s really going on, even if by accident. Hearing her going “Oh Mark baby!” And you hear obvious walk thumping. But he gets cuckrd one day coming home from work early, doesn’t realize Marks home with Mandy and hears the bed incesantly hitting the wall, then hears the slapping of skin, and something on the lines of “fuck your mother , Mark, cmon baby fuck my pussy, your poor fathers at work while his son is ploughing his wife in their bed”. They’d forgotten to close the door so her husband goes up to investigate and sees her legs pointing to the ceiling and Mark just bouncing off her

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Solid but getting stale. I think the first chapter should have been drawn out a little more. I don't know any boys that would be so open to... YAY we are here to have sex with our moms. The moms would have taken more convincing. Maybe the moms talk to a mom support group that went through the strange program so they see the progress... the benefit of the program. Part of the draw of these stories is the mom exposing her most private region to her son. It has become so common that it is not taboo. None of moms have any problem showing ass to the any of the boys? Not a second of uneasiness of exposing their ahole to the boys?

Mark talking so openly with Ryan didn't work for me. He has to know this is unusual.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Less anal more vaginal sex, please.. goodness and more than once during the night.. he’s 18 or 19 he should go 2-3 times with his mom. Heck when I was 16-17 I could go 4-5 times with my older sister.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I'm fine with the anal but don't like Mandy slutting around with the other sons. I like how they're breaking down the dad and making him more okay with the sexual activities

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Is the story over?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Dude.. where’s part 9?

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Is the story progressing or is over?

mantonrichardsmantonrichards2 months agoAuthor

Yes, the story will continue. I've had the next 2 parts mostly written for a couple of months but it takes time to edit and get to a state I'm happy with. Other things in life take priority. Be patient.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I am in huge anticipation of the next chapters of this storyline! It is in fact my favorite story on literotica, precisely because of the anal incest focus! Personally I feel Mark is the main protagonist so the reader mostly identifies with him. Describing the ass and the anal through his eyes in more detail may benefit the reading experience, even though your multiple viewpoints are not bad at all for the overall story. Thank you very much!

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*** End of August 2023 *** I've nearly completed SAMBA Pt. 8 - only editing remains - publishing soon. Work on SAMBA Pt. 9 has started. I've also started another completely different story project in the style of Victorian / Edwardian erotica. The seeds of other ideas are t...