by Sunadmire
Hey Sun, I loved the way you integrated this story intp those already published. You may expand a bit on side characters like Alex and Dirk fot the benefit of those not following you.
Sandra's hand cannot rub Laura's nipple 'unconsciously'. It can do this 'subconciously'.
I would have loved a scene where Keith has his way with Laura...
Some spelling mistakes and a few lost spaces, but infrequent enough not to distract.
5 Stars!
I'm not so much into lesbian action, but you managed to keep me interrested, well done. You've got me interrested into reading Sis's Transformation. I hope it is as good as this one!