All Comments on 'Sandra's Challenge'

by Sunadmire

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ErilogicaErilogicaalmost 2 years ago

Hey Sun, I loved the way you integrated this story intp those already published. You may expand a bit on side characters like Alex and Dirk fot the benefit of those not following you.

Sandra's hand cannot rub Laura's nipple 'unconsciously'. It can do this 'subconciously'.

I would have loved a scene where Keith has his way with Laura...

Some spelling mistakes and a few lost spaces, but infrequent enough not to distract.

5 Stars!

Stoere_BoerStoere_Boerover 1 year ago

Good job here Sun, keep writing. 5 Stars.

PlaasJapiePlaasJapie6 months ago

I'm not so much into lesbian action, but you managed to keep me interrested, well done. You've got me interrested into reading Sis's Transformation. I hope it is as good as this one!

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Love to read hot stories with some drama. Got going on a few stories. I try to give it a South African flavour, while keeping it relevant to the international audience. If you like my stories, give it a high score. Enjoy.