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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 4 years ago
Go with the flow, Jim!

Hope to read more of this tale. Five stars for this episode. Don't worry, Jim. If Becky's not aware, just go with "What happens at the Mall stays at the Mall." Enjoy! Five stars for you, JJ!

OGHMNWOGHMNWover 4 years ago
Santa’s presents 🎁

Jennifer, Santa Jim is truly enjoying this surprise and feeling guilty at the same time. He appears to have given a more than satisfactory gift to the first elf helper what’s in store for the remaining two elves? Thank You and looking forward to reading of Santa Jim’s Experience at the mall.

hindsight2020hindsight2020over 4 years ago

Good start to a first chapter.

Too short to give more than a "3* keep writing."

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 4 years ago

This is a wonderful opening teaser. I'm glad I'm getting a late start 'cause now I can go straight to Part Two! Five stars from me.

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