by boxwoodsub
The writing is fine, the grammar and spelling are both good however the storyline is far too cold and unemotional. There is nothing erotic, no enjoyment, no love, certainly no respect, just a series of cold, actions by a misandrist, sadist. Can’t see any point to it all. I suppose if you enjoy this type of unemotional, clinical, pain & punishments, for the sake of it, then it’s fine but unfortunately for me, it’s a bit like reading a shopping list.