All Comments on 'Sapphic Fairy Tales 01: Little Red'

Use the word Mistress way too often, hurts the flow of the story.

I was wondering when you'd come back! Another author had started a series of lesbian fairytales, though they were openly parodic and a -lot- raunchier; this is a promising oeuvre to a more grounded take. ;p

This isn't the first I've read the Wolf played allusory as a domme, even on this site, but this is a rare blend of thematic poetry with proper sex, that reads familiar in structure while still fresh in execution. I'm excited to see how you bring this focus to the rest of the canon.

I would have liked to learn whether Little Red stayed with Mistress Wild or returned to her village. Fun story. At one point I even imagines Mistress Wild's mouth elongating into something wolf like. Well done.