All Comments on 'Sarah Gives in to an Older Man'

Some words need some corrections-

wattled should be waddled

peak should be peek

Watch whether you mean “who’s” or “whose”.

These are just a sampling of errors that I noticed.

Jack needs to give Sarah a present. A baby bump would be a great welcoming to the neighnorhood present.

Looking forward to the next chapter let’s see him turn her into a submissive housewife for all his perverted fantasies

Please proof read.

Eine absolut geile Geschichte hoffe nur auf eine schnelle Fortsetzung

You really need to read and then double read your work... maybe even get someone else to read it. Problem is that the rough grammar and poor spelling negates the rough sex turning hot, juicy and throbbing into luke warm, sour and limp.... you know you can do better, so take yourself to the naughty step to reflect a little....😏.

Waiting on the next chapter see what the old man has in store for her

Too short but cracking story. Thank you

Couldn't stop reading. Please finish her journey and take us where you want her to go. Great story

I'm a pervy so I luv this kinda stuff.i doubt it would go down that easy in the real world but still a good read.the full.meal deal 5

part 2 please