by netsub
I really liked your hot story of this sexy sub slut, and hope that you will continue with the punishment of this young slut.
Mmmmm, i just love stories about humiliation, and wow, yours was hot. Thanks. Please keep writing.
~judy~
Well here’s the thing, see she’s a Submissive we get that yup and he’s dominant and will shame her to an erotic what have you.
When lead with, what a great cock-sucker she is while you ease back into your easy chair admiring her fine ass... how shall I say, we’re done. We the readers seeking some kind of creativity, that brings characters to life... find instead
The Bitch is Mine! Essentially. You portray her as great body parts
Mouth sucking cock, Ass cheeks. As you sink back into your easy chair to be blown
Since unreal it feels more like you are easing back into your easy chair with
Fleshlight & lube, now you have shared that fantasy with us.
Take a chance, be human
Best in the new Year!
Previous review mentioned not realistic.
I found the story had strong emotions and erotic.
For realism there is always real life