All Comments on 'Sara's New Discovery Ch. 02'

Wonderful story.... I hope it continues

I think he needs to kick her to next week. You don't get to play and be so hurtful to someone you love. She's a bitch and that's just a fact.

Premise still good.

But...

Was the whole thing with Ethan necessary? Not to me. To me it was just a digression.

And when she finally got around to edging her husband, it really lacked details -- details thet were more than a laundry list of things that took place. Why not some dialog during the edging? Why couldn't she ask him how it felt? Tell me what you're thinking about when I jerk you. Are you close to cumming? Well, you're a long way from cumming. I'm having too much fun. Slow down. Speed up. Does he groan? Moan? Beg?

So much could have been included that wasn't. Sad.

And you wrote: "...his tighter then normal shorts...". You meant THAN, not THEN.

Three stars.