by MDSW
Great story.... Look forward to reading mlre chapters.
There is a close resemblance to "Threads: The Island" by JammyJimmy in the intro, but it is taking on the role of a sequel. I just hope that you develop the characters independently from the route the other story was heading.
I agree this does seem like a sequel to JimmyJammy's story, which I always thought needed a sequel. I like the direction so far. It reads more like a summary than a story in places, but I like the flow of dialogue between the characters.
Looking forward to where this goes. As with the others, this feels like a sequel, but so far so good, and hope the story continues, cause the orig needed to go on.