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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Couldn't finish it; innumerable punctuation mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I loved it. This guy was focussing on copulating... rather than punctuating.

TacomabillTacomabill12 months agoAuthor

Thanks for the input, re-edit will be up soon.

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