All Comments on 'Saturday Night Five Ch. 11'

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Worth the long wait! Gutted to have to wait more to find out about the rest of the bday weekend! Thanks again!

HAPPY THANKSGIVING TO US!!!! Yes!!!!!!! Will be reading once I can.

Easily my favorite story on this site right now! I like how you’re descriptive when describing the girls actions and always make sure to mention how their bodies look, it makes the story seem more immersive from Leo’s POV since he -as a teenage boy- would be very focused on that I imagine. I’m hoping Katie didn’t hook up with Henry, but we all make mistakes sometimes. As always though I can’t help but be a Tayla fan, and while Annie or Rose seem to be the romantic focus right now I’m hoping if there’s a relationship at the end that Tayla wins, however unlikely it seems. I’m curious, do you have any favorites when writing the girls? I’d rank them personally as follows,

1. Tayla

2. Katie

3. Milly

4. Rose

5. Annie

Of course they all have their moments but some stick out more for various reasons! Looking forward to the next installment, you’re writing is getting better every upload as well!

I feel like there’s so much sex and conversations that we’re missing in between chapters which isn’t a bad thing because you can fill them in later if you want. What I don’t get is how he is expecting Annie to possibly hook up with him in this 4-day weekend when she’s not fully aware of his feelings (which I’m not even sure he has anymore since you haven’t circled back to it). That’s the only part that really has me scratching my head because there is development that needs to be shown between them since they met at his place with his parents etc. I would strongly encourage making the rest of the weekend about the first four and have Annie go on an actual camping trip with him for their actual first time if the end game is those two together. I feel like if there is any teen couple you’re gonna make “soulmates” it’s him and Annie or him and Rose. Unless you have Tayla build it up with him.

And again, you have an incredible strength with writing sex scenes. Most oral sex scenes for me are meh. Yours I greatly enjoy. Don’t rush it. This whole saga is super fun to read.

Worth every minute of the read, keep it up

Oh wow I don't know ow if I can wait til Christmas for the next installment!!!

Glad people are enjoying! Next chapter in the works, I’ll do what I can to get it out asap without making any promises!

On a couple of the comments: I’ve got quite a few Annie scenes coming up in the next couple of chapters. Hopefully it comes across well and the storyline ideas with her isn’t too rushed or forced.

On another comment about the rankings, I love to hear who people like the most out of the five. Personally I do have favourites in terms of writing their character. I find Rose one of the funnest characters to write about. If ranking them on who I think is best suited with Leo, I’ll leave that to everyone else to avoid potentially spoiling any chapters down the road.

Good story so far. I can't wait yill chapter 12. Maybe do some pregnancy scares just a thought hope to see chapter 12 soon

Dude awesome story just one problem, WAITING PLEASE TRY TO POST IT SOON REST AWESOME BUT LOVE IF ANY GIRL WOULD BE INTO SOME FREAKY THINGS, LIKE ANAL OR SOMETHING BUT REST LOVE YOUR STORIES

Love the story so far! Would be great to have more scenes and relationship building with Annie, Milly, and Katie. I think Rose is great but she's been pretty heavily involved so far.

I would like to see more characters introduced that can continue challenging the group dynamic. That's one thing I think this story has over others of similar topic.

And of course if you could update a bit more frequently that would be ideal.

Great story. Leo getting some Annie time would be awesome and also pulling for him to reconnect with his first, Katie, again soon. Those two should totally be together when this story closes at some point. Hopefully not too soon.

Great story you have going. I'm intrigued to see how his relationships with Annie and Tayla progress.

more please!

Just 2 words.

MORE PLEASE

More please

Not sure if is there going to be another chapter or not, but I am still curious about where the story is supposed to be heading. Now, while this chapter was average, I also found myself bored with SNF. How can you make a nerd with five hot girls, boring? Are you taking lessons from the Bond film, SPECTRE? I mean you are eleven chapters in and I am not sure what the main character, whose name I cannot remember the actual relationship he has with the girls. Friend? Maybe? More? Unsure. Friend with benefit? Depending on the mood of the girls.

So I just discovered this story the other day. I do hope you write more. That said it's a nice story reticent of beauty and the geek the main difference is there was a clear picture who was either together or who was gong to end up together. In your story while it started with Leo wanting Annie it seems to be a group thing which isn't bad but by 11 chapters in and school ending there should be one that I would think he would start to focus on. Either on of the 5 or someone else entirely. Hopefully that will become more clear as chapters progress. But again this is a very solid story and can't wait for more

Really enjoying the dynamics between friends.

Want to see what fun they have and who ends up with his heart rather than just his dick!?!

MORE PLEASE!!!

Dude, seriously, we need more of this story ASAP.

Hey man it's going to be 3 months soon. Any updates?

This has got to be my all time favourite series. Please keep it going

Hey buddy?

dude...you good?

Hey man, love the story but was wondering if there is going to be more. Please give us an update. Thanks

I’d really like to see some group games, more girl on girl, he finally gets with Annie, and more Katie again

We're still patiently waiting for the continuation of this amazing story hopefully its not too much longer

Heyyyy is everything alright? Are you going to continue with this Story?

Will there be more of this story? Really want to see where this goes

I was hoping that he would have posted another chapter by now, or at least gave us an update. It is a great story and I hope it wasn't abandoned

The literarary equivalent of blue balls, no finish and no idea if there will be

Frankly nothing pisses me off more than wasting my time reading a good story from start to finish and NO FINISH, it's one thing to know more chapters are coming, that's like coitus Interuptus, but seeing as you've posted a new story since this without even the courtesy of an update or promise of more that's just disrespectful of the reader

Bad form dude