All Comments on 'Saucy Valentine'

by bonalisa

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Proofreading!

You need to proofread the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Romantic story, very hot

I was so excited when i read this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
This story gets my vote!

This had me rock hard!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Very sexy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Very sensual and erotic.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassabout 5 years ago
Is it hot in here?

All those candles probably raised the temperature twenty degrees. Then the hot sex on top of that raised it another twenty. These two lovers are going to pass out from the heat.

Great Valentine's Day story. Good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Saucy

Very sexy 😅

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Never let it Burn

Sexxy And Amazing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Makes me want to try this recipe!!!

Makes me want to try this recipe!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

I like that your story isn’t long long and dragged out. You get right to the good stuff. I ike it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great Story

Would love to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Sexxxxxxy

Man that kitchen was hot and steamy 😅

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Very nice. Romantic, sexy and just enough sauce for ❤ day

bonalisabonalisaabout 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you❤

This was my first time posting a story anywhere!

I would like to thank everyone, for taking the time to give me both negative & positive feedback.

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