All Comments on 'Sausages Backstory Ch. 01'

Good start for a story, I look forward to seeing how it develops.

This has a great deal of potential. I like the slow build-up! Too many writers get into the wanking material when erotica is much like love in many ways. A slow build-up of tension can be very effective.

Read this first part and try to walk away. I am sure there is a psycho term for it but everything that follows is the fatal attraction from hell. You know how you can't walk away from a fatal accident but need to watch and laugh hysterically while the bits and pieces are scraped up delivered to the morgue.