by Fibaro
I hope the guest at the door is Leila...gosh, that would be a hot story!
Although the story content was good, you rushed it to posting. If You're using an editor, they missed several errors. Take your time before you submit the next chapter. I normally don't comment, but this time the errors were distracting.
These are honestly my all time favourite stories on LIterotica, and I find myself checking your page several times a day to see if the new chapter has been posted yet lol.
One thing I would love is if Savannah made Roxie eat her sweaty ass. Some fart stuff would be really hot as well or even shit, but I know that some of the more extreme stuff wouldn’t be as widely popular so I get why it might not surface here.
But overall an absolutely fantastic story set and I can’t wait until part 16!
Well you Sir could give us another chapter of Hannah :)