by Dash91830
One of the best stories by the author despite the terrible beginning, unfortunately ends not so great either. Love the loving ending, hated the urination stuff. Its not a bad story overall just with the cuck stuff at the beginning and the urine stuff towards the end it weighs down a shockingly cute story of a girl protecting a boy.
I agree with Flynn. This was a story of hope and freedom and you turned it into something abuisve. disgusting and ugly.