All Comments on 'Saving the Day'

The story was great. The writing, not so much. You need an editor.

Why, oh why, are all these husbands written as such pathetic losers?

Loved it, ignore the haters!!! Need chapter 2 where she catches the limo just before it leaves and tapes the driver fucking her in the back! Back of the limo that is! LOL!!!!

You put a big smile on my face. Thank you for a great story, in spite of the typos. I'd love to hear more.

Excellent story! You had enough of a story line but got right to the hot parts. I think you also set this up for multiple chapters. Maybe the one or more of the groomsmen or the father of the bride. That can be two separate chapters. You can have a couple chapters for when you get home to your husband as well.

another shitty slut wife story

Really, this was such a fun story. thanks for sharing.

You asked if I enjoyed reading. Not so much. You need an editor as there were a number of grammatical errors. Normally this would not be noticeable by most readers. But even I noticed them and I wasn't great with grammar. Errors, plot, subject matter, believability, are issues.

I think humanity is in a downward spiral.

Haha, I have done a similar act of charity for my bride cousin. I fucked the florist for two weeks in exchange for the flowers. Years later, when my husband was asking me to be shared, I told him about it. We were married at the time of my cousin's wedding, and he was unhappy that I did not let him watch me get used like a whore by the flower guy. Very good story!

Since Emma is married she would be the Matron of Honor.

Yes, Jay is a complete wuss. He'll give Emma a big kiss with plenty of tongue, thus also giving the scumbag limo driver a blowjob by proxy.

To address deadone's question "why, are all these husbands written as such pathetic losers?" Well, that would be something to ask the author. Maybe past experience.

"Loved it, ignore the haters!!! "

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Telling the writer to ignore others for the sin of daring to have a different opinion than yours is a far better definition of hater that what seems to exist in your little mind. They comment on the story and you start post commenting on them.

Sexy and short, great read

I do love a slit

There is nothing better than a woman like her. I love my wife sucking other mens cocks and getting excited. It’s quick and easy and I love seeing how hungry she is . She loves having to get on her knees and suck like a whore who doesn’t have any choice.

A nice story where the cuckold theme didn't go too deep. just needed a grammar check/proof read.

Great story, loved the cuck play! And I love a lady that swallows cum!

Nice little story, a few errors here and there but who cares - not me.