All Comments on 'Savour Me Pt. 06'

This kink is not erotic for me, but that is my problem/limitation. The writing continues to be very well done — back/forth between characters adds to the piece, like the dialogue, which is a strength of your pieces, that and the introspective moments enrich the scene(s) and characters. And your description/characterization of Abby brings her to life; in fact, something you do well with all Olivia’s “clients” as well as Olivia herself. Part of the reading enjoyment. So, while I will not seek out pieces centered on this kink I will your stories and characters because they resonate.

I swear, you can make *anything* erotic. What a talent.

Migbird, thanks. The watersports is a one off in this series. It doesn't feature in parts 7 or 8.

toesucker1, thanks for the compliment. Pity I'm not into the foot thing, otherwise I could write something hot in that genre for you. :-)

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Thanks for a very horny story.

Very descriptive of both women loved it.

I just wish this could/will become not an 8-part but an 80-part series… Thank you so much, Lissy…

Hey, got to add a follow up: However I feel about sex depicted or whether you see piece as a one/off, the writing creates characters and scenes that resonate — you can feel it. Why readers will follow.

Thanks for the positive comments, they encourage me to continue.

Don't worry PervLust, there will be more stories to come after this one.. ;-)

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Hey! Look at my profile! Face sitting works!! (and frankly is more satisfying for all involved ;-))

toesucker1... 😄

Well we agree on that one - both ways around. 😋

Awww so happy for Abby. This one put a smile on my face