All Comments on 'Saying I Love You'

This is the type of loving Femdom story that I adore, and there are far too few like it. And when they are as wonderfully imagined and written as this one, it is truly a joy to behold. Thank you.

Good premise.

But jumps too fast into heavy sex once it starts.

Lacks details. Needs much more teasing of him and his cock. Needs to tease him beyond where he's happy it's still happening. Needs teasing him with her breasts, not just letting him such them in right away. Needs teasing him with her pussy. Maybe getting it so close to his face that he can smell her, but not reach her with his mouth/tongue. Maybe she could play with her pussy while she's there, letting him hear her, and smell her increased arousal. Maybe taste her fingers.

Three stars.