All Comments on 'Scared Sister Pt. 03: Thalassophobia'

Wonderful story of real love. Pregnant I am guessing. Now it will get more interesting than it has been. More please

People don't shutter..............they shudder. So many writers make that mistake. Good story though and looking forward to the next chapter.

Not bad of a continuation, but one thing: every cruise-ship has a) a ships doctor and b) a pharmacy; same goes to many tourist-centers which usually are harbors for a cruise. So she could have gotten the anti-phobia-thing (and/or contraceptives) easily; so much of the story felt "off" to me. Also you've missed a chance: every cruise has a mandatory emergency-training for life-vest and evacuation, where they could have met Dad and Aunty and eventually cleared out some issues during the cruise. Would have given the story much more dynamic as both protagonists could have experienced a nice vacation as couple... But pls continue the story :)