All Comments on 'Scarf Collectors Ch. 01'

Weird and Erotic. Loved it.

This story has so much potential. You have set the stage well. Those of us who grew up in the hay day of slips and silk scarves know the pleasure they give.

I look forward to the rest of the story.

Well, you asked.

To be fair, the other choices might also lead to interesting storytelling.

If he left, surely he would be preoccupied with what he'd missed, and eventually he'd return.

If he wanted to leave, but she refused to allow it, could he resist the silky, temptations and tortures?

Fortunately, I see you've offered us your choice (I hope). Thanks for your great writing. I'm off for more of it.

Interesting premise.

But barely a beginning.

Needed more dialog about whether he liked the way she looked. Did he think she was beautiful? What about her was the most attractive?

What would he like her to do to him while he was immobilized with the scarves?

Four stars.