All Comments on 'Scavenger Hunt Ch. 02'

And the mystery deepes with each new paragraph

Spies no more .

Still not getting the big picture or actual drama or behind the scene. You should put some context of the other antagonist/s alongside the IC so that we can anticipate with the actuality of the story. Otherwise it feels to being a blind person being led by and asked if this is the address. BTW great story and suspense. Keep the good work.and thank you

SOME people know how to tell a story and... WW is one of the best. Cliff Hanger's or us, well done!

The third chapter in the story has been submitted.

I finally got a clue right. I knew from the moment it said two women and two men, it was the Apple Grove four. Why? They fucked up their mission and needed to be silenced. Why was one raped? That one I don't know. Love IC and his crew. If only they were real. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

I feel like Yul Bynerr (sp) of The King and I. “ It’s a puzzlement, it’s is a puzzlement “. Is WW splitting into two different storylines or the Toyota Gang and espionage spies under one huge umbrella of new CofC. Don’t have a clue. On to next chapter. Well written WW

*****That was a given four bodies. Thanks for sharing.