All Comments on 'Screentrips'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice

I really enjoyed this story. The sex was good, but the story as a whole worked well, moreover.

Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
alright

Less talk more sex

AlmostAliceAlmostAliceover 12 years ago
Good writing

Loved Jill and Jim's interplay. Bit disappointed it ended on that note though, this sounds like a concept with so much potential.

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