All Comments on 'Screentrips'

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AlmostAliceAlmostAlicealmost 13 years ago
Good writing

Loved Jill and Jim's interplay. Bit disappointed it ended on that note though, this sounds like a concept with so much potential.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
alright

Less talk more sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice

I really enjoyed this story. The sex was good, but the story as a whole worked well, moreover.

Good job!

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