by DampKitten
Wow! You've combined eroticism with revenge and fantasy and written a classic short story. The pirate sub plot reminded me so much of Alan Moore and Dave Gibbon's brilliant graphic novel, Watchmen. I loved reading this. 5 stars, naturally.
Horrified. Riveted. Fascinated. Story telling prowess like this deserves more than Five stars.
Excellent!
Well written short erotic horror!
Great twist built on a strong plot.