All Comments on 'Seafaring Delight Charters Ch. 02'

Well, I liked it, and I want to go sailing too!

Difficult to read and very choppy. Please decide whether you want it narrated (first person) or not (third person)...it jumped between them so often it wasn’t an enjoyable read.

You are right KinPA, I brought the characters from another story, and I did a poor job of switching, somewhere along the way. When I tried to pursue the same idea in this story, I floundered, because there are two woman. I will resolve the issue as I can.