All Comments on 'Second Puberty Ver 1 10'

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Robbb_FangRobbb_Fangabout 1 month ago

Very short, but nice progress.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Chapter begins, but far too short for continuity

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I'm enjoying the story, but this is where it kind of fails flat for me. If she still thinks like a guy enough to turn down and avoid who was her best friend, she would be irate about her mom thinking she would blow strangers. It's one thing to play with your new body at the coffee shop, but totally different to do the disgusting job at the massage parlor. It seems like he would fight anything that appeared gay and would need to be pressured by the mom, the government agency and face threats to the parents to get him/her in line. Something like that would make more sense than be upset with his friend and brother, but not being a cum dump.

muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 month ago

"Yo' 'ny g''d 't bl'wj'bs?" - wtf?

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