All Comments on 'Second Wife: Ch. 01'

HOT. Your description of a man being fucked hard by an alpha relative was riveting. Your story made me feel like I was a bottom getting a merciless ass fucking. I liked this a lot, Hope more chapters will be coming!

So many typos, you can't make sense of the story.

Sorry if it sounds pedantic but the grammar is atrocious throughout, which spoils what is a good story.