All Comments on 'Secret Lover Ch. 02'

Watch the spelling and grammatical errors. Congrats on the engagement.

Congrats!

Damn saw that coming just didn't think she was his wife, loving the story so far, can't wait to read more .

isnt this getting cliché. rich white guy, psycho ex-gf/wife, new love is young black woman and jealousy set to break them up.

Very good update, please update soon. Glad you are back

I appreciate the feedback , and to the reader who believes my writing to be cliché ... I hear you , however being that its my first story I wanted to test the waters and get my feet wet before I dove into any of the other stories ive been working on.

for the masses who may read and have facebook , I started a writers page

where i will be keeping everyone up to date on upcoming chapters of secret lover and many other writings i will be doing. Its also a way for people to give me feedback and ask me questions . https://www.facebook.com/Zombie8Cupcke

Looking forward to the rest of this series. Other then a few missing punctuations and mixed spelling, yer doing a grand job :) Keep on writing :)

Okay, You have to finish this!!!!

I cannot wait for more!

I'm so glad Ch. 2 came together for you. It totally lived up to my expectations. I can't wait to see what happens next, because it's about to get real. -DC

I need more, I'm so addicted, love these two. Please hurry

More please

I hate extensive drama. Oh well. I've gotten this far.