by CJT
I swear, this story is a rom-com with bdsm elements in it. Just a bit of drama to get the ball rolling but plenty of heartwarming moments. I need a TV show with Gavin, Alex and everyone else.
Well written dialogue where Gavin reassures Alex about the fact that it is ok to have a personality that doesn't completely fit the submissive traits but who brought Gavin to strive to become a better Dom. And putting the accent on the fact that the role that each of them has for the other is to challenge him/her to become a better person .
I liked Gavin's response to Alex describing what a sub should be. Maybe his advice about respect will even help her mother.
The ending left me hanging like everyone else, but since I have not had time to be reading the last little while I see the next chapter is up so I will proceed to it. I am wondering what Gavin will say when he gets his gift or if there will be consequences for it. I was amused by the scene with Alexandria bound to the couch and him trying to get the figure out of her for his gift, but it was a little unfair but a good tactic to use even though it left her hanging so to speak. I was really surprised that Alexandria was so embarrassed by the trucker seeing her. I also thought that Gavin pointing out to Alexander that she needed to show her mother respect because of her father was insightful but I am not sure I could live by his standard even given his good reasoning.
Another great chapter - nice to see Alex has some wonderful family in her life, not just jerks. I see some generous help being provided to Livy and Nora in the not too distant future, thats for sure. Great cliffhanger :) And the scenes, needless to say, were perfect :)
I don't know how manage it ... But I am always sitting there curious to death after I stumbled on one your cliffhanger masterpieces
You are very cruel to stop right there.
I like how you are developing everyone. Standing up to a horrible person, especially in defense of others, isn't automatically disrespectful. That Alex was so forceful about it spoke to just what a tough old bird her mother is. You have to adjust your force to the level of the problem. That said, Gavin's advice about it was solid.
That cliffhanger got me good. As a side note, this was a breath of fresh air compared to the drama brought about by the pneumonia and Elizabeth. They are so utterly perfect for one another that I get all giddy whenever they have their moments. Can't wait for the next chapter!
LOL, would now be a good time to mention I'm taking some time off from writing? Just kidding, next chapter up in a day or two. Love the response!