All Comments on 'Secret Stranger'

Nice and to the point!

More please

I definitely feel like there is more to this story.

More cumming, more to share

But you know what they say "Delayed gratification is character-building" hehe

Definitely going to need to know who it was.

So hot! I’ve always loved the idea of getting taken like this.

I rode a bus to work, the afternoon before Thanksgiving it was packed with some people having to stand. At the last stop a man got on but at the back door and stood in the step area, holding onto the post above. Above him were a young woman in a light green skirt and coat with a white blouse and a man discussing a chamber of commerce issue. The bus bounced as the driver was in a hurry to also start the holiday. The woman came in contact on several occasions with the hand of the man below. As the ride progressed the man's left hand found its way into the women's crotch. Standing next to her was a tall teenager who started to laugh at what was transpiring. The man talking to her also saw the hand now in her crotch. Regardless she continued her conversation like it was normal for some stranger to investigate her sex. At the third stop, the stranger departed.

I do feel he might have left enough of an impression that woman later masturbated.

A chamber of commerce is there to serve. It appears this young lady was fulfilling that service. It could have been she was asked: Can I feel you up while you answer his questions? Regardless, I hope word of her commitment gets back to her superiors? The only thing that seems extremely likely is that she masturbated later, and I think she got herself off while naked.

total 5 ,10 if i could

Thank you all, for your supportive comments - much appreciated

I have just submitted the next & final part of the story for publication, hope you enjoy it.

Again, it is not strong on characterisation or has too much of a back story - part 1 story in the series is the backstory

5 stars

This reminded me of a very similar story I wrote years back. I don't know if I still have that but you made me think to look for it and see if it is post worthy. Nicely done in this one. I liked the energy of it.

Thanks BigD

And there's a second part

" I became a slut and loved every minute of it."

You go girl