All Comments on 'Secrets Ch. 01'

After the recent iron crowbar stories, have we now arrived in a parallel universe?

Don and Laura must have been knocked out and be under sedation at someone is trying to find McGinty Materials, by probing the Iron Crowbar's brain again, probably using the same drug treatment. Could the Rovers of the rogue BAU unit be behind this or someone far more powerful and dangerous? Possibly working within the Federal Government?

Following the furore there was with regard to the Dream Weaver story I'm going to wait quietly to see where this goes!!!

As I commented previously, Dream weaver was one of my favourite series of IC saga. Reading the next segment of it is too good to be true. I am so much involved in this series that I don't want to put any theory to it. Great work WW. Thanks for your story.

it would troy is being drugged and his mind is being altered.

As I read this I can not help but see Him, in my minds eye, as the character in (Its a wonderful life). All the things that could have happened if he had made one different decision early on in life. Great Way to dig deep into his mind though.

The next chapter of the story has been submitted, and hopefully will be published soon.

Thank you WW for having a new story ready so soon. I enjoyed Dream Weaver when it was published and I'm sure this new tale will be just as enjoyable, if not more. Looking forward to part 2.

Well Don must have had some Navy Coffee and a few magic brownies or he went bareback with the wrong woman, cause he's a tripping.

This is certainly different from your normal police crime stories, but it has some interesting parts. Somewhere in this story it will begin to make sense. Keep it going as I am anxious to see where this is going.

read dream weaver didnt help. just want to quit reading, in times like this dont need all my heros dying etc. also if parents were killed dream weaver how come mother alive now . jjust very disturbing twist youre taking.

I remember reading Dream weaver...this could only mean one thing DON have been captured and drugged again...

Will they be successful this time around? Only time will tell...fingers crossed

Thanks WW for keeping us from being bored in this lockdown

God bless you

Looks like the CIA have got Don again and using drugs, etc on him. But could it be the FBI.

I agree with some of your previous commenters that Don is drugged again by whom??? The person behind this is sugggesting that persons who were bad are now dood and vs. it is a Bizarro ( Superman comics) Don now thinks is reality. Good writing.

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