by LiamCox
Hot story! And unless the people that are shocked or offended by these two young men getting together are homophobic, I don't see why anyone should be upset by them having a sexual relationship. After all, there's no incest here, they're only related by parents' marriage not blood.
Not only hot for me but you did a great job of showing how special it was for of the stepbrothers. Their surprise at how both physically and emotionally they were clicking and made for each other. This is special and shouldn’t be ignored. As unique as you wrote their physical compatibility to be, you also began to share the other special things they had not found before…this quickly became obvious to them and us readers that this was obviously not just a hookup but something they will want to continue. This has all required ingredients for a series and plot lines including parents reactions which should be cool after the shock dissipates, how the summer develops, overcoming hurtles to visiting while at college and possibly even one of them transferring to the others college, is one Bi but not out? The list goes on. But damn, these special and unique opportunities should not be squandered as they don’t come along often in life! Carpi Diem!
What a hot story!! You showed how emotional and physical they loved each other and how hot of sex they have loving each other!!