All Comments on 'Seducing Her Brother's Best Friend'

Good story but not quite believable. Among other things, I can't see parents betraying their son like that. It doesn't take any investigative skills for Tyler to figure out he was framed with the parents being the obvious choice. No way 5hey would destroy their own son.

I found your continual mixing of tenses between past and present in the same sentence to be very off-putting. For example, "Something about the way Beatrice's parents looked at him made him fear that things are about to get difficult." It should be "WERE about to get difficult." This sort of thing happens several times on each page, and really distracted from the story. Only 4 stars as a result.

@Anonymous

I didn't read the story completely but i don't think it's that bad particularly in this sentence. Things are or were, both actually meant the same thing for me . Just giving my opinions .