All Comments on 'Seduction of a Married Man Ch. 01'

A good start and I have followed to see what comes next.

Glad ya liked it Mike. Chapter 2 is up and more to cum!!

Thanks for sharing your work!

Love the buildup! Keep it going.

Written just as it should occur....naturally and patiently.

The dialogue is a welcome surprise thanks for something that peaked my interest!

Thank you all for the positive words!! I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters just as much.

i loved the flirty nature of this, and how Al consumed Natalie's thoughts. He lived in her head, and she enjoyed the company.... : )

A good start to this series. I will say...I really enjoy how you write your dialogue. It flows very naturally. That, to me is vital. If your reader isn't comfortable with how your characters are intermingling, then it could be difficult for them to get into the story.

Nice job :-)