All Comments on 'Self Dares Ch. 02'

Another great story!

I like the way you make your stories flow.

Almost like your righting from experience ?

5 star 🌟

On to one of your other stories.

OK. Why didn’t she shower in the hotel when she got up? I don’t understand. Great story, though.

Excellent story! Very realistic dialogue and an overall fun story. So nice that she had a terrific experience. A full 5 stars.

Bill S.

I love your tales of these two with their dares , their mischief and pranks oh to have had such friends in ones youth, but it's a different world now to the one I grew up in.

Shockingly realistic dialogues. The story is so realistic. It's like it's all real. It feels like I know the characters in real life. Every detail is precise and forms a perfect whole. Maximum score anyway. My credit to the writer. I definitely need the next chapters. 5 stars. :)

Another great chapter and an extremely well-written sex scene! You must be basing this on some real life experience 🙂

Well written and enjoyable, thank you for sharing! Martin never really got much description tho - a few hints of personality and tension would have ramped up the sex a lot. Still great tho and looking forward to reading more ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I really enjoyed that. For a while I wasn't sure where the story was going, but it reads so naturally, I didn't mind.

- I agree with ElectricBadger, some more description of the people would be nice and develop their personalities, describe how they're feeling by what they're doing and how they react to the situation. We understand your lead character, but it would be nice to get to know the others.

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