by nudedude03
The story had potential, but then you had to ruin it with that lame ending. Spanking and peeing... Really? It would've been much more hotter if he involuntary came in front of the audience.
Its great and I love how it ended, although if he cummed on himself and it had crusted over I would have loved some detail on all the dry cum when he's hes in front of the school. From my knowledge, I think this is the first time you mention piss in your story and I think its rather good :)
I love your writing and eagerly await your next story!