All Comments on 'Sensational Slut Sets Sail Ch. 02'

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Kiwi4everKiwi4everover 2 years ago

I know it is only a story but there will be men (Assholes) doing this to women just because they can they

think they are just great not my way to treat women hopefully they get their just desert one day.

Slut4daddie36DSlut4daddie36Dabout 2 years ago

Hmmmm, I want to be Allie, please cont her adventures on the boat and off.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

At least Brad and Allie are handling this the right way, by sharing all the details with each other all the extra fucking just falls into the category of foreplay where it belongs. Benson and cronies haven’t worked out yet that they’re the fucktoys for her.

Bit of a slip on p1 of this chapter when Brad was suddenly Pete.

Benson the boss is a full on arsehole, seems to have the little man syndrome. Bandying the word “slut” around like it’s supposed to be an insult 🙄 Men like that don’t seem capable of the shocking fact that just like men the vast majority of women love sex. What’s not to love. Well aside from the fact that they’re pressured into this. It’s all very predictable though.

Tess (uk)

FantasyballerFantasyballerabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks, Tess. I caught that slip and a couple others along the way. Once in published mode corrections are difficult to make. It seems that my endless re-reading is still on occasion, flawed. Just like my life. Thanks for reading.

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