by SherryDarling
Sherry, this was some awesome skilled writing. You actually made me picture you doing all of this. It got me rock hard as i was transported to your bathroom. Keep.up the great writing, your friend howie xoxo
Sherry, your writing is always superb. You have picked up your skills to a level above and beyond. Yiu got me to feel like i was right there in the shower watching you. Definitely caused me to get going and filled me with desire as well -rock hard-
Keep it up! Your friend howie xoxo
Great short story, the simplicity is what gives it a charm. Only suggestion would have been too have a bit more in her preparation to getting into the tub. Everyone out of the house, peeling her clothes off and tossing it in the hamper, mentioning slightly the story that got her hot. Maybe also alluding to how she looks like. The rest is very hot.
drip drip drip warm scented oil as i stand over you.......gentle breeze in the background......warm rustles from reeds....
Fairly straightforward description of a woman jilling off, nothing more. No catch, no twist, no surprise, no unique approach.
I would so love to be standing in the doorway just watching you pleasure yourself, extremely hot!!! Thank you for sharing
Loved it. Sometimes experiencing yourself puts you in charge of your orgasm and when to let it overtake you!
Wish it was a little longer. You don’t take as long as I do. I was just starting to get hard…