All Comments on 'Sensuous Shower'

by SherryDarling

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Mark_MichiganMark_Michiganabout 1 year ago

Everyone deserved solo private time like this. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Sherry, this was some awesome skilled writing. You actually made me picture you doing all of this. It got me rock hard as i was transported to your bathroom. Keep.up the great writing, your friend howie xoxo

Howiemark1Howiemark1about 1 year ago

Sherry, your writing is always superb. You have picked up your skills to a level above and beyond. Yiu got me to feel like i was right there in the shower watching you. Definitely caused me to get going and filled me with desire as well -rock hard-

Keep it up! Your friend howie xoxo

GeneralUrsusGeneralUrsusabout 1 year ago

Amazingly well written and hot as hell! It definitely gave me a woody!

annabellebritoannabellebritoabout 1 year ago

Great short story, the simplicity is what gives it a charm. Only suggestion would have been too have a bit more in her preparation to getting into the tub. Everyone out of the house, peeling her clothes off and tossing it in the hamper, mentioning slightly the story that got her hot. Maybe also alluding to how she looks like. The rest is very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

drip drip drip warm scented oil as i stand over you.......gentle breeze in the background......warm rustles from reeds....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Fairly straightforward description of a woman jilling off, nothing more. No catch, no twist, no surprise, no unique approach.

Mark_MichiganMark_Michiganabout 1 year ago

I would so love to be standing in the doorway just watching you pleasure yourself, extremely hot!!! Thank you for sharing

Kummer385Kummer385about 1 year ago

Loved it. Sometimes experiencing yourself puts you in charge of your orgasm and when to let it overtake you!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Wish it was a little longer. You don’t take as long as I do. I was just starting to get hard…

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I have been reading erotica for years and began writing it a few years ago. I am now ready to share it here and hope you all enjoy! Sorry I don't play sex online.