All Comments on 'Serenity Ch. 04'

I can't wait to see what you have in store for your readers... Great start!

I know Matt is a bit dense sometimes but how does he expect to have more than a friendship with Honey with him married to his delusional crazy wife? Honey is not going to be his mistress regardless of how broken his marriage is.

I don't think the world is going to fall apart if he finally gets the courage to divorce Krystal. She definitely will continue to act like a deranged person but at least he will be on the path of getting rid of her. Putting on appearances is what got him in this mess. Knowing Krystal she will blame Honey for Matt leaving her.

Ariesgirl - I think its getting to the stage where he knows what he has to do but is just worried of the repercussions.

But yeah I know where I'm going next and that is going to definitely be explored.

Mimi

xoxo

Matt really should sort out his life before he goes anywhere near Honey.

I really do not understand Matt, I thought he was all Alpha male with Honey and can't keep his cheating wife uncontrol. He needs to expose her for the lying cheating witch that she is. Ready for the update.

You really fleshed out Matt very well in this piece. It's interesting to see that although he's always been someshat guarded the coldness is a result of krystal's deception. He needs to put his own happiness as a priority, I wonder why he hadn't for so long. Can't wait for the update and you are most welcome re: the editing

I really hope there is more to come soon, love it

Thank you so much for commenting.

I really appreciate the feedback.

It helps me decide what I'm doing next.

So glad you are enjoying it too.

Mimi xoxo

Finally an update please don't take so long again! Now I think that he should continue to pursue honey it should all work out and krytal need to burn

Girl when are you gonna start a new chapter for this story? Get with it I hate when you guys don't finish. Ugh....sigh

Another good story not finished. I hate it when authors do this. I know you all set out with the intent of finishing, but you never do. Ugh! Finish this please. I hope Matt man's up and leave his whore of a wife