by Juliathewriter
You need more Sexual detail in your stories. It was good but it didnt make my blood boil. Women have the tendency not to get in to the hot wet nasty details as men do. Like how big was his cock how thick. Did his cock stretch her out, did she scream and have to brace herself when mounted her because he was big. Tell us how her hungry tight pussy milked his cock for his cum. Did he cum so hard she could feel his head swell as it flooded her womb. You get the idea? People read these stories to get a sexual high
You definitely have a knack for writing. And I am guessing as well as you write if some guys are not getting to indulge in you for real, then it is a true shame you do not have any daring gents around you. It would be a wonderful exercise for both of you!