by Iwroteathing
I love this theme. I've been thinking about writing a story like that, I guess that I no longer have to :)
I love it until the biggest party. I understand that it was the main scene, but for me it was too rough. That's just my personal opinion. though. Still a job well done. I gave it 5 stars, because I loved the first part and that's what I was rating.
Wow, this is truly one of the best stories I have ever read - perhaps you would consider writing a chapter two?
Really liked this one. Surely the prisoners have planned even more humiliation for Warden Leona after being mean to them in a chapter two ;)?