by YourWillingToy
I'm really enjoying this series, and definitely looking forward to any additions.
Too hot to stop here. Keep on going for at least another chapter - or more!!!
Please keep going with this. This story is super hot, and your writing and descriptions are really, really good. Loving it!
This story is so great and the fact that these aren't professional doms or something just a couple of young girls who stumbled on something good makes it even hotter. This could go on for a while.
Premise remains good.
Still lacks details.
Edging session/s seem to be so repetitive. Needed to be different sorts of teasing, not just the same old, same old.
Four stars.
So glad this doesn't really follow the usual D/s procedure and script ... so boring and predictable. This is far more exciting and unexpected!