All Comments on 'Seven Year Itch'

It was obvious where this was headed from the beginning. It sounded familiar enough to another recently submitted story that I wondered if you didn't simply change a name or two. Gone three years and this is the best you can do? Not very encouraging.

Good one !

I nearly didn't get it

"Diana now saw that while Rick's face gave away no emotion, he had an erection bulging in his boxers." - Husband getting an erection is an automatic one star deduction.

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So it was just fantasy talk. Meh.

There will be no next time, because the whore has hopefully become infected with HIV and dies a slow and painful death! And if we're lucky, then she has already infected her idiot husband and he is allowed to die with her. Ain't that cool Both die of the same idiocy!

I thought that it was well done, certainly well written. Mattenw and Morterna93 missed it completely.

I dont understand why authors who write cuck shot refuse to use the tag

its like they want to get one star

Use the tag and those who dont like getting sucked into reading cuck shit wont read it and punish you for being a liar

I'll give you credit, did anything happen or was it all just role playing? I'll go with role playing and give it 4* (The alternative plot line is 3* at best)

Just get a divorce.

I think readers should read the story again. In this instance it was role-playing no one actually cheated well not physically. Maybe next time.

@mattenw... Mortenera93... reread it, concentrating on the last FOUR paragraphs. Look for the nuance. Read aloud if that helps. It's a GAME they play, making this up and telling each other.

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To OP: GREAT story, evocative of what I suspect married couples have been doing for ages! Great twist at the ending. You had 'em going! Hell, you had me going right up until the end. 5+++/5!!!

Chill guys ! There was no infidelity.

So sad a few have missed the humor

Nothing like a loving couple role playing and experimenting together. That’s what couples are supposed to do but not with others . Keep it up

Excellent story, really had me going, then the nice LW/LH bit at the end to finish a sweet flash story.well done 5*

Skillful manipulation of perspective; from somewhat depressing to..."hot damn"! 5 of 5

Very good, thought for a moment this was another tale of slut and loser, well done.