All Comments on 'Sex Slave'

Five stars until lame end .. sorry....

Once again, I'm compelled to remind commenters to be kind in their feedback.

I thought this was a fun scenario, although it's hard to portray large numbers of partners in a way where they don't blend together. I am kinda curious about what might happen in the future if the main character stayed on the island, as well - there are story hooks there that go away if it was all a dream.

Hey there folks, this was written a LONG time ago and I had to revise it in order to be certain it didn't infringe the minimum age requirement, but maybe more relevant I had not finished it originally and quite honestly I didn't have enough interest to work out a more adventuresome ending. SO, sorry folks it "is what it is", but thankyou for the comments, and for tagging this old man with "favourite" status.

Overall, this has good bones. I like the plot and the characters, and there's a lot here to work with if it were to be fleshed out. Maybe think of the story in its current state as a sketch to be revisited and filled in later? Anyway, I'd love to see more.

To Coldxxx - Actually the ending was appropriate. It's not unusual for someone shipwrecked and suffering from exposure to have fantasy dreams.. and I loved the fantasy...