All Comments on 'Sexting with the Secretary'

by insatiableboi

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Interconnection between stories

You should explain the interconnection between your various stories. On it's own, this story isn't something I would rate very highly. However, when you realise the background to this particular story is contained elsewhere in your other stories,Hot Gina and The Breakwater, it gives it quite a interesting twist.

insatiableboiinsatiableboialmost 6 years agoAuthor

Yes haven't figured out how to connect story lines yet.

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