All Comments on 'Sexual Adventures Pt. 02'

This compelling drama continues in this chapter, but this reviewer strongly agrees with the author's suggestion that the story of John and Kelsie needs to be read from the first, with the story entitled Play Time With a Friend. That said, the writing in this story overall is excellent. The characters are well-defined and truly come alive to the reader as the plot unfolds. The love scene in this particular chapter truly enriches the plot, and the romantic atmosphere is very appealing. The only flaw in this chapter is its brevity. Five stars.