by Wanderer694Ever
Isn't feeling like much of a romance, more like a lust fest.... Where are the expressions of love? What is the hesitation to fuck? Why not just one big submission with the entire story? Is the entire story even written?
Very well written for your first story. I hope we find out what Suzie's mother Amanda has to say soon.
Nice, simple and exciting. This definitely needs more chapters.
Amanda can’t be surprised. She knew her daughters would have desires, and knew how close she was to Mark. The shock, is that she hadn’t talked specifically about Susie and Mark, before they became a couple.