All Comments on 'Shared Against my Will'

Needs a little polishing but, otherwise, good

Sorry but you lost me in the capsule summery with your woke 'cis male/cis female'. Real males and females don't need added designations. A male is a male and a female is a female. Add the designations to the phony, pretend males and females.

Bring on pt. 2!

Great story. Looking forward to part two!

Perfect!! Can’t wait for Part II!

Traveler68's transphobia is gross.

Need to have someone do spell check. The story needs to be fleshed out more, but a good first effort.

@traveler82 why even make that comment?

Author, this was a great story.

Good first attempt. Try to take on board the positive comments. Before submitting, re-read and check it through, and especially decide whether you wan to use the present or past tense - mixing the two doesn't work

You've got my attention, and juices flowing. Bring on more.

Goodness that was HOT!! I always find the disclaimers at the beginning a put off, I try to blank them. This would have been hotter if I could picture better the sex rack. It would also have been hotter if she had been tied down in her normal clothes and then he slowly stripped her in front of his friends (you only name three friends, not four), and none of that commando rubbish, panties are sexy, well they are if they're normal bikini type and white or near white. Can't stand thongs, and I can't stand this completely shaved 'down there' nonsense either. Yuuuuk! Natural but trimmed is the sexiest. Glad to see they're wearing condoms. I look forward to reading the rest - R

Very good

Well developed. I enjoyed it.

This was enjoyable. Dropping right into the scene just as the friend arrives helps keep this concise. For now, we don’t need a lot of background, although there is fertile ground here for some to come in future chapters. She seems, at first, surprised but not necessarily afraid. If this event had come completely out of left field for her, perhaps expressing her fear at being forced more acutely could add some texture. The fact that she gets so turned on right away means she also has some backstory that could be explored. Even if it was use the drugs that made her so excited, delving into her high and how it lowers her inhibitions could work nicely. Still, 5 stars from me.

Suddenly I find myself binging on 4rced2Njoy stories… and they are scary good!! As a part time woodworker I am suddenly also interested in creating a “sex rack”…

Wow this got me as it was a similar fantasy me and my girl had discussed during sex and she (along with me) seemed to really like the idea of being restrained and used (not abused) but sadly I think I missed that window of opportunity...can't wait for next chapter!

I guess it makes me a horrible person but I find this very hot and if I unexpectedly found me wife in a situation like this once I knew she wasn’t going to be hurt I’d watch them drive her crazy making her orgasming again and again.

Loved this one!