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Ken pulled me to the floor and we lay together while Dustin and Camille finished. We stared at each other with smiles of pure joy. I had no idea how to thank everyone so I just fell asleep under Ken's embrace.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years ago... but in the meantime, thanks for posting.
goodcatalmost 4 years agoI concur with comments by Anonymous on 9/22/19. They are correct and precisely on point. AnonymousRobin is clearly a talented writer and should be encouraged to grow and write more. Philistines of good moral character who do not like the stories do not have to read them. Then they would not feel moved to deliver destructive criticism.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI loved the story and definitely was excited hearing it and imagining my girlfriend and I in a similar situation.
Anonymousover 4 years agoWow! I'm amazed at the level of judgment from other readers! Seriously people? Why are you on this site? This story was well-written, descriptive, and honestly not unbelievable. You may think the subject matter is destructive in a real life situation but I've witnessed it personally in one form or another from long-term, committed couples who either don't have the same hang-ups you do, or work through them because they can be honest with each other instead of pretending they're in some one-size-fits-all fairytale relationship. Who are you to say they are destined for failure? If it works for them to explore life beyond the societal norms it's none of your damn business.
AnonymousRobin you are a talented writer and I would definitely read more of your work, so keep it up!
Anonymousover 4 years agoI had to exile it and banish it and then execute it. And i stillcould not enjoy a story about the death of a marriage.
