All Comments on 'Sharing a Hotel Room with Coworker'

good story

Good premise.

Too predictable.

Lacks tension.

She says what she wanted to do with her fiance. She does it with Matt instead. That's it.

Needed more build up. Needed more dialog about what she was planning to do to him -- while she was teasing him. What she was actually doing as she was doing it. How she was enjoying. Was he enjoying it? Did he want more?

Four stars.

Get an Editor or a Proof Reader.

Great story. I'd love to read more about these characters. I hope continue thier relationship after they return home.

Yes, I agree with the previous poster who suggested a proofreader as there are many errors.

Enjoyed it. Nice work!

It is an awesome story, keep it up you're doing great. Thank you for sharing.

And then? AND THEN? The convention isn't over! There MUST be another chapter or squel surely!

Hot, fun, and Well done Dcw! But, please, the sequel!!!